I am still blogging

 I am still blogging … 

but I’ve moved.

Click here

to visit my new blog

and see the next stage of my learning journey.

Comments are closed here. Please comment on my new blog

Hikau Poem

 Hikau poem

We were doing a Hikau poem about a celebration i did christmas. It is technically 5 syllables on one sentence 7 on the other and then 5 again. I enjoyed using the fairy claps and chin check to see if i had enough syllable. Next time i will make it more descriptive and make it have more rich works. i think this turned out good

What do you think i could work on? Do you like it?

My Science Journey! 2021

My Science Journey! 

 In term 2 i chose Science and knew nothing about it and now i know quite a bit. The first thing we did was brainstorm what Science was and i only said around 10 words and they weren't very descriptive next up we learnt how to make Bath Bombs and i made a blog post about it, i made my for my mum but she doesn't have baths so me and my sister decided to use it so that it wouldn't go to waste.  We did things like cold water balloon experiments which included A LOT of chemicals  but then we had enough of explosions and alkaline and citric acid and baking power and we started getting ready for Newton's Law Of Motion! I think it was probably the longest thing we did and it was really fun! We learnt about Sir Issac Newton's law motion Inertia, Mass, Acceleration. My favorite thing we did was the egg drop.

Thank you for reading my Science Journey!  

The Fun Run!

 We were learning about how to write about the fun run and how to make it rich and descriptive. I had found it easy to add rich words and make it descriptive but i found it hard to try and make it make sense because sometimes i would write a sentence and it didn't really click. What i will try and do next time is stay more focused on my work and to try and shorten my writing down a little bit so it can be more like a moment in time.

Is there any tips you would like to give me?

Do you like my writing? 

Is it rich?

The Rarotonga Beach!

 We were learning about how to add personification in our writing. We wrote about our favorite place and mine was The Rarotonga Beach! I enjoyed writing this and i hope you enjoy. I found it hard to find the right places to put my capital letters and i found it easy to add rich words into my writing. Next time though i will add way more personification in to my writing to make it more descriptive.

Is there any tips you would like to give me?

Do you like my writing? 

Is it rich?

The Amazing Clinic!

THE AMAZING CLINIC!!!

Today we were writing about something that is worthy about and put it in a recount if found it easy to do a couple of things like writing and describing what was interesting and what i was feeling it and posting it to my blog. I found some things a little bit challenging like publishing and it onto a slide using grammar etc this was a very fun piece of writing to do but next time i might be more specific with my words and add more detail to my published version.

My piece of writing! How do you think i went what should i add what should i consider doing!

My Turn!

 We were learning about.... How to write about the olympic games.

I found it easy to... Put the photos on to the slide .

I found it hard to... Write my piece of writing.

I enjoyed... Writing and publishing it.

Next time i will... Add more descriptive words.

My daily journal

 We were learning about.... How to write a daily journal during.

I found it easy to... To write different notes each day .

I found it hard to... Try and think of the best parts about my day and what i'm looking forward to tomorrow with rich language.

I enjoyed... Waking up each morning and knowing I can do my journal.

Next time i will... Make it longer with my notes.

My dads birthday!

 It was my dads birthday today. He turned 21 he was at work when we were setting up which was AMAZING because then we could decorate without him being there! Its also a bumber because he had to work on his birthday. we got him clothes even tho he has a lot.

I'M SO HAPPY ITS HIS BIRTHDAY 

My family AKA my brothers.  

My axolotls!

 These are my axolotls the 

White one is Albie and the black one is Blobbles. They are actually Called mexican walking fish and they are pretty unique animals we also have fish in a separate tank because if they are with the axolotls they would kill them.  

WHOS IN MY BUBBLE?

 I have a big bubble i have talked about them about some of them in my comic but i haven't told you ALL of them so i will tell you.

In my bubble at my house i have...

Me

Monroe

Mum 

Dad

My street bubble is...

Iyve Mac Annie

Riley Couper 

Kyra

Other people... 

My big brother

My other big brother

Myla and Ryder.

My pony in lockdown

   

My pony Is in my Bubble his name is Trigger and he is a appaloosa

I have been spending a lot of time with Trigger during lockdown i give him a lot of kisses as well because he deserves it.   My family loves him alot and alot  and he is covered in a lot of attention he also loves galloping.                                                                                        

My Comic ( Day in the life of lockdown )

 We were learning about... How to make a Comic.

I found it easy to... Write and type the word correctly .

I found it hard to... Polyline the charters and everything right and to make sure the charters are like themselves!.

I enjoyed...Watching it and seeing the funny parts in it.

Next time i will... Make it detailed and more descriptive and add more polylined pictures.

Spring poem!

  We were learning about... Making spring poems.

I found it easy to... Put the words in.

I found it hard to... Think of different words.

I enjoyed... Seeing the end product.

Next time i will... Make it more detailed and more words.

Bubble recount!

  We were learning about.... What to do in lockdown.

I found it easy to... Make my title page.

I found it hard to... Write the piece of writing with descriptive writing.

I enjoyed... Seeing the end of my writing.

Next time i will... Make it longer and stop putting so much ands.

Reading Create!

 We were learning about... The independence games in the south island.

I found it easy to... Polyline my swimmer and get the movements right.

I found it hard to... Think of a way i could put my human in the right place.

I enjoyed...Seeing my the end of my animation.

Next time i will... make it more detailed.

Fantasy Creature!

 We were learning about... How to create a fantasy creature.

I found it easy to... Polyline my animal and think of good ideas of what stuff it should have.

I found it hard to... Try and get good pieces of writing that makes sense to my animal.

I enjoyed...Reading my writing and looked at my polylined animal.

Next time i will... Try stay more focused and use more descriptive words to describe and write about my animal.

The Brain Box

 CAN YOU DO IT TOO?

we made brain boxes today! it was very hard it took up a lot of time and effort but it was EXTREMELY fun.

We auslly failed like a trillion times but in the end we got it. We did a propeller one we were going to do a 

smiley face one but Vinzent and Eraia didn't want to.  My group was Vinzent Ruby me and Eraia the group was really struggling.

IT WAS SO FUN

This was fun and i want to do even more of it i wanted to complete the book i wish we rotated more often as this brain box was very cool i want to get one myself!

We were learning about... How to experiment with electricity.

I found it easy to... Pick a pattern.

I found it hard to... Put all the parts together.

I enjoyed... Watching the propeller go around and press go for it to start.

Next time i will... Try stay more focused and work with my group more.

Acrostic poem about the 2021 olympics!

 We were learning about how to put all our knowledge about the olympics and put it into a Acrostic poem. This is my poem i think turned out pretty good I used all my knowledge about the Olympics/ Paralympics.

How do you think it looks cool and do i need to work on anything?

Comment about how i did!

Egg Drop!

 We were learning about Newton's first  law Inertia Equipment we use was.....

1 cup

Water

A flat tray or plate                                                         Go to the team Tora site to learn more!

Egg                                                                                                The site

1 cardboard toilet paper role.

CAN YOU GET THE EGG IN THE WATER?

We filled up the cup of water and placed the plate on top then using the toilet paper roll to place above it leaving the egg on top of the of the toilet roll. I placed my hand i couple of centimetres away from the cup and then my arm started to feel tense put i went for it and knocked the egg into the water after that i was worried there was a chick inside of the egg and i wiped the egg and did the whole thing over again.

Newton's First Law, once the egg was moving, it didn't want to stop. The container of water interrupted the egg's fall, providing a safe place for the egg to stop moving so you could recover it unbroken. The gravity-pushed egg caused the water to splash out.

We were learning about..Newton's first law of motion

I found it easy to... Set it all up.

I found it hard to... Make sure the egg was going to land into the right.

I enjoyed...Watching the egg grow large as it plopped into the water.

Next time i will... Try stay more focused and keep my hands steady.