Hikau poem
We were doing a Hikau poem about a celebration i did christmas. It is technically 5 syllables on one sentence 7 on the other and then 5 again. I enjoyed using the fairy claps and chin check to see if i had enough syllable. Next time i will make it more descriptive and make it have more rich works. i think this turned out good
What do you think i could work on? Do you like it?
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