Hikau poem
We were doing a Hikau poem about a celebration i did christmas. It is technically 5 syllables on one sentence 7 on the other and then 5 again. I enjoyed using the fairy claps and chin check to see if i had enough syllable. Next time i will make it more descriptive and make it have more rich works. i think this turned out good
What do you think i could work on? Do you like it?
My Science Journey!
In term 2 i chose Science and knew nothing about it and now i know quite a bit. The first thing we did was brainstorm what Science was and i only said around 10 words and they weren't very descriptive next up we learnt how to make Bath Bombs and i made a blog post about it, i made my for my mum but she doesn't have baths so me and my sister decided to use it so that it wouldn't go to waste. We did things like cold water balloon experiments which included A LOT of chemicals but then we had enough of explosions and alkaline and citric acid and baking power and we started getting ready for Newton's Law Of Motion! I think it was probably the longest thing we did and it was really fun! We learnt about Sir Issac Newton's law motion Inertia, Mass, Acceleration. My favorite thing we did was the egg drop.
Thank you for reading my Science Journey!
We were learning about how to write about the fun run and how to make it rich and descriptive. I had found it easy to add rich words and make it descriptive but i found it hard to try and make it make sense because sometimes i would write a sentence and it didn't really click. What i will try and do next time is stay more focused on my work and to try and shorten my writing down a little bit so it can be more like a moment in time.
Is there any tips you would like to give me?
Do you like my writing?
Is it rich?
We were learning about how to add personification in our writing. We wrote about our favorite place and mine was The Rarotonga Beach! I enjoyed writing this and i hope you enjoy. I found it hard to find the right places to put my capital letters and i found it easy to add rich words into my writing. Next time though i will add way more personification in to my writing to make it more descriptive.
Is there any tips you would like to give me?
Do you like my writing?
Is it rich?
