We were learning about how to write about the fun run and how to make it rich and descriptive. I had found it easy to add rich words and make it descriptive but i found it hard to try and make it make sense because sometimes i would write a sentence and it didn't really click. What i will try and do next time is stay more focused on my work and to try and shorten my writing down a little bit so it can be more like a moment in time.
Is there any tips you would like to give me?
Do you like my writing?
Is it rich?
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