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Hikau Poem

 Hikau poem

We were doing a Hikau poem about a celebration i did christmas. It is technically 5 syllables on one sentence 7 on the other and then 5 again. I enjoyed using the fairy claps and chin check to see if i had enough syllable. Next time i will make it more descriptive and make it have more rich works. i think this turned out good

What do you think i could work on? Do you like it?

My Science Journey! 2021

My Science Journey! 

 In term 2 i chose Science and knew nothing about it and now i know quite a bit. The first thing we did was brainstorm what Science was and i only said around 10 words and they weren't very descriptive next up we learnt how to make Bath Bombs and i made a blog post about it, i made my for my mum but she doesn't have baths so me and my sister decided to use it so that it wouldn't go to waste.  We did things like cold water balloon experiments which included A LOT of chemicals  but then we had enough of explosions and alkaline and citric acid and baking power and we started getting ready for Newton's Law Of Motion! I think it was probably the longest thing we did and it was really fun! We learnt about Sir Issac Newton's law motion Inertia, Mass, Acceleration. My favorite thing we did was the egg drop.

Thank you for reading my Science Journey!  

The Fun Run!

 We were learning about how to write about the fun run and how to make it rich and descriptive. I had found it easy to add rich words and make it descriptive but i found it hard to try and make it make sense because sometimes i would write a sentence and it didn't really click. What i will try and do next time is stay more focused on my work and to try and shorten my writing down a little bit so it can be more like a moment in time.

Is there any tips you would like to give me?

Do you like my writing? 

Is it rich?

The Rarotonga Beach!

 We were learning about how to add personification in our writing. We wrote about our favorite place and mine was The Rarotonga Beach! I enjoyed writing this and i hope you enjoy. I found it hard to find the right places to put my capital letters and i found it easy to add rich words into my writing. Next time though i will add way more personification in to my writing to make it more descriptive.

Is there any tips you would like to give me?

Do you like my writing? 

Is it rich?

The Amazing Clinic!

THE AMAZING CLINIC!!!

Today we were writing about something that is worthy about and put it in a recount if found it easy to do a couple of things like writing and describing what was interesting and what i was feeling it and posting it to my blog. I found some things a little bit challenging like publishing and it onto a slide using grammar etc this was a very fun piece of writing to do but next time i might be more specific with my words and add more detail to my published version.

My piece of writing! How do you think i went what should i add what should i consider doing!

My Turn!

 We were learning about.... How to write about the olympic games.

I found it easy to... Put the photos on to the slide .

I found it hard to... Write my piece of writing.

I enjoyed... Writing and publishing it.

Next time i will... Add more descriptive words.