Tuesday, September 28, 2021

The Amazing Clinic!

THE AMAZING CLINIC!!!

Today we were writing about something that is worthy about and put it in a recount if found it easy to do a couple of things like writing and describing what was interesting and what i was feeling it and posting it to my blog. I found some things a little bit challenging like publishing and it onto a slide using grammar etc this was a very fun piece of writing to do but next time i might be more specific with my words and add more detail to my published version.


My piece of writing! How do you think i went what should i add what should i consider doing!

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2021 at 9:52 AM

    Chase I liked how you structured out your paragraphs and something that you could work on next time is making sure that it makes sense. You did a great job chase good luck on your next peace of writing. By Riria!

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2021 at 9:59 AM

      Thanks Riria for your comment but i did make it make sense so you might wanna re check that because it make sense.

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