We were learning about how to add personification in our writing. We wrote about our favorite place and mine was The Rarotonga Beach! I enjoyed writing this and i hope you enjoy. I found it hard to find the right places to put my capital letters and i found it easy to add rich words into my writing. Next time though i will add way more personification in to my writing to make it more descriptive.
Is there any tips you would like to give me?
Do you like my writing?
Is it rich?
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