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Monday, August 23, 2021
Spring poem!
We were learning about... Making spring poems.
I found it easy to... Put the words in.
I found it hard to... Think of different words.
I enjoyed... Seeing the end product.
Next time i will... Make it more detailed and more words.
I liked reading your Acrostic poem about spring. Great job on using shapes to create the sun and cloud. I thought some of the words you used were very descriptive. Next time you could extend your words into a longer sentence about Spring or try a different type of poetry. Ka Rawe Chase.
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I liked reading your Acrostic poem about spring. Great job on using shapes to create the sun and cloud.
ReplyDeleteI thought some of the words you used were very descriptive.
Next time you could extend your words into a longer sentence about Spring or try a different type of poetry.
Ka Rawe Chase.