Friday, June 11, 2021

Should we be prepared for a natural diaster?

  •  We were learning about... How to persuade someone with writing.
  • I found it easy to... Add more rich words and posting to my blog.
  • I found it hard to... Look for persuading words.
  • I enjoyed... Writing it and getting to argue.
  • Next time I will...  Try and add more connectives.

 

1 comment:

  1. I really like the way you are telling us if you agree about should we be prepared for a natural disaster and giving us evidence why you agree.I also like the way you have punctuation in your writing giving it more pop.I also like the way you put different colours for each of your slides so it does not only have one colour in each slide.But next time have a much more longer stems about what you where learning about,what you found easy,what you found hard and Next time. And next time I can see some mistakes in your writing so next time check you writing but everything else is amazing and keep up the great work.

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